The golden brown is gorgeous. I might try to steal it and use it on the desert, if I make any adjustments to that Bone Town poster.
Can I give you some constructive critisism? I'm not waiting for an answer, so ...
Her knee and foot look like they might be jabbing him in the head and back. Instead of going over and down, you might take the leg down and back, so her foot's behind the horse. That would also help keep the boy's silhouette free and clear.
Another little place you could futz it to keep a clean silhouette - nudge his hat left and his fingers right, so the 3 fingers can be out in the open. Just a thought.
The free floating tail is neat, but I'm not sure if I agree with it. Since it's the only disconnected thing in the picture, it kind of looks like it might be a big flame shooting out of the horse's butt.
I mean, we must be here to say something besides, Great job! / Nice work! / Keep it up! / I like your stuff! ... Right?
G, I think you are right on! I will be changing that for the final. Thanks for the honor crit and suggestions. I always value those especially from you.
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Wow! Awesome as always!!
Great one Heath! Love the style and the characters....very animated.
Rob
Nice work! Love the texture the line work that darn Illustrator and you can do!
Nice piece dude! Makes me wanna become a buckin' bronko billy bob buckaroo... or something like that. Keep the goodness a-comin'!
awesome man...the colors and textures are great. as is the drawing and the design. Very Cool!
This is so nice. What's this book about?
The golden brown is gorgeous. I might try to steal it and use it on the desert, if I make any adjustments to that Bone Town poster.
Can I give you some constructive critisism? I'm not waiting for an answer, so ...
Her knee and foot look like they might be jabbing him in the head and back. Instead of going over and down, you might take the leg down and back, so her foot's behind the horse. That would also help keep the boy's silhouette free and clear.
Another little place you could futz it to keep a clean silhouette - nudge his hat left and his fingers right, so the 3 fingers can be out in the open. Just a thought.
The free floating tail is neat, but I'm not sure if I agree with it. Since it's the only disconnected thing in the picture, it kind of looks like it might be a big flame shooting out of the horse's butt.
I mean, we must be here to say something besides, Great job! / Nice work! / Keep it up! / I like your stuff! ... Right?
Much love.
Yo, did you get my email of 4/3? About Mr. Practical?
G, I think you are right on! I will be changing that for the final. Thanks for the honor crit and suggestions. I always value those especially from you.
I love the energy and colors in the piece, they really look like they're having a great time!!!!!
wow your stuff is great
FUN beautiful illo!!
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